SHOW NOT TELL
Emily stomped her feet and shouted to her sister laura, “ Im coming to the shop with you”. Laura clenched her fist and said ,” No you are not coming with me to the shop you are annoying you always ask me for food “. Laura’s mum said to Laura , “ take your sister with you to the shop”, Laura stomped her feet and locked herself in her room and started throwing stuff in her room .
Emily was excited that her sister took her to the shop with her. Laura’s Heart was pounding because her friends were there she felt embarrassed and running away from her sister. Laura’s friends saw her and started coming to her she dashed into the toilet and left her sister behind.
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